The Last Carnation (A Couplet)

Behind me lies a thorny garden, paved with love; I’m at my destination.

Dear, the celebration ends here; I turn back to pick the last carnation.


Written by Chirasree Bose

15 thoughts on “The Last Carnation (A Couplet)

  1. Small and nice πŸ™‚

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    1. thank you 😊

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  2. I felt very deep pain while reading this short piece. Very simple , precise but full of misery and suffering.

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    1. thank you 😊

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  3. Something very painful in it.. whats it about Sree..?? It gices a sense of being sorry or rather feeling sorry

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    1. it’s like someone is standing at the end of their life and looks back. The journey looks like a garden. So before ending it they decide to pick the last flower from the garden.

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  4. Really admire your writing.

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    1. thank you 😊

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  5. Beautiful n nicely poured in cup of poem,keep blogging dearπŸŒ·πŸ’•

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      1. You’re most welcome friendπŸŒ·πŸ’•

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