The Last Carnation (A Couplet)

15 thoughts on “The Last Carnation (A Couplet)”

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   mistimaan May 14, 2018 — 10:17 pm

   Small and nice 🙂

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      Sreeblogs May 14, 2018 — 10:55 pm

      thank you 😊

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   Tanveer Hussain May 15, 2018 — 12:49 pm

   I felt very deep pain while reading this short piece. Very simple , precise but full of misery and suffering.

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      Sreeblogs May 16, 2018 — 12:35 am

      thank you 😊

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   mylittlepursuitsofhappyness May 15, 2018 — 4:12 pm

   Something very painful in it.. whats it about Sree..?? It gices a sense of being sorry or rather feeling sorry

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      Sreeblogs May 16, 2018 — 12:38 am

      it’s like someone is standing at the end of their life and looks back. The journey looks like a garden. So before ending it they decide to pick the last flower from the garden.

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         mylittlepursuitsofhappyness May 16, 2018 — 12:03 pm

         ok… sounds better now

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         Sreeblogs May 16, 2018 — 6:57 pm

         😊

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   Neema Ali May 16, 2018 — 12:33 am

   Really admire your writing.

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      Sreeblogs May 16, 2018 — 12:39 am

      thank you 😊

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   Bhavna Saurabh Sharma July 1, 2018 — 6:23 pm

   Crisp short and impactful.

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      Sreeblogs July 2, 2018 — 3:03 pm

      🙂 Thank you

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   ravindra nayak July 2, 2018 — 11:01 pm

   Beautiful n nicely poured in cup of poem,keep blogging dear🌷💕

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      Sreeblogs July 3, 2018 — 12:35 am

      thank you

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         ravindra nayak July 3, 2018 — 12:36 am

         You’re most welcome friend🌷💕

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