That’s how the story ended( 1 min read)

Ahana's hands shook vehemently as she looked down at the glass in her hand.

A doleful smile crossed Amit's lips as she neared him.

She tilted the head of his bed, avoiding eye contact with her husband.

Amit forced a smile, 'today I'll be free from this cage', his eyes shifted to his paralyzed body.

Ahana held out the glass, tears blurred her vision, her hands trembled.

'Won't you say goodbye?'He asked.

She shook her head as tears poured down her face.

Amit took a deep breath, 'I love you…', he leaned his head forward to drink the poison.


Word count – 99

Written by Chirasree Bose for 100 Word Wednesday: Week 30

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15 thoughts on “That’s how the story ended( 1 min read)

      1. Check out my stories or poems if you get time

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      2. Sure I will😊😊

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  1. Aww what an ending and soulful story

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    1. Thank you 😊

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  2. I don’t think she could live with the fact that she was the one who gave him the poison even though her intentions might be good.

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    1. I agree…but maybe she’d be happy thinking she freed him from the pain☹️☹️

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      1. It’s one of that situation which will eat a person up from the inside – She might be feeling happy about freeing him of the pain, and at the same time she would feel bad for doing the same, all because she too loved him.

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      2. True it is☹️☹️

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  3. Again the punch at last. Amazing as usual. 🙂

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  4. Woah what do you have with poison these days??!!😳😳😱

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