You’ve got to die( 1 min read)

you’re gonna die today – The message popped up.

I frowned.

you’ve got 10 minutes…, another message arrived.

I looked around the tram and saw an old lady, a middle-aged man, a young girl and a little boy; they looked back at me with a strange smile lingering on their lips.

My phone lit up –

Well, let me refresh your memory…

My heart stood still.

Exactly one year back you murdered a woman who happened to have a mother…an elder brother…a younger sister and a 11 year old kid…remember???

I stood up; how did they find me, I pondered; I’d left that country. My mobile buzzed –

I hope you understood who your fellow passengers are…

I looked up; they all stood together, facing me.

I’d decided that I’d jump off the tram; it’d break a few bones…that’s it, I smirked and turned to run, but my mobile beeped again –

I’m waiting outside in a car just in case you jump and I can run over you…she was my wife…


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This week’s photo prompt is provided by Yinglan

 

Written by Chirasree, a dreamer for –  FFfAW Challenge-Week of May 30, 2017

Word count – 171

42 thoughts on “You’ve got to die( 1 min read)

  1. Whoa – excellent! Gave me chills!

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    1. Thank you 😇😇

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  2. Exxxxccccceeeelllleeeennnnttt…..😨👻

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  3. Great scenario, well done. Really good, would love to read on and see if they can get out of it alive!

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    1. 😇😇. Thank you

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  4. This one definitely gets you attention. Sounds like you are between a rock and a hard spot.

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    1. 😇😇 thank you

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    1. 😊😊 thank you

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  5. Excellent story! Very chilling! It baited me right away and kept me wanting more. Welcome to the FFfAW challenge! We are happy you have joined us. If I have told you this before, forgive me. I have been away for a few weeks.

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    1. Thank you 😊😇😇

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  6. Great story, lovely punchline.
    xxx Huge Hugs xxx

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    1. Thank you 😊😊

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  7. You’re so good at drawing your reader in super fast! I love it!

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    1. Thank you 😇😇

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  8. Ooo I like this one a lot!

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    1. Thank you 😇

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  9. oh revenge is always intrestng to read about and the way it started with messages being recieved it wa really amazing.

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  10. Wow! that was seriously chilling.

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  11. Wow. I’ve got chills!

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    1. 😄 thank you

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  12. I want to know if you got out alive!

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  13. Whoa! That’s one way to get revenge! Chilling story, and well done.

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    1. Thank you 😊

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  14. Very well crafted. Kudos.

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    1. Thank you 😊😊

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  15. Really scary …..

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    1. 😀😀 glad the story made you feel so

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  16. Yikes! This is intense. Well done!
    Going Home
    Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~

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    1. Thank you 😇😇

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  17. michael1148humphris June 4, 2017 — 4:16 am

    Not a house of horrors but. A tram of horrors. Great take on the prompt

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    1. Thank you 😊

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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