I said no( <1 min read)

“…you’re a waitress now!!” He mouthed off once his fiancée left to the loo.

The smirk on his face made me want to smack him, but I managed to muster a decent smile – “Your order, sir?”

“Do you even realize what a life you would’ve led had you not…” He paused and ran a finger down my arm, giving an evil grin.

“…had I not refused to become a toy you could play with. Actually I don’t sell my heart to men for money. I’d rather marry a waiter who only has eyes for me…got it, you moron?”

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PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

Written for – Friday fictioneers

Word count – 99

19 thoughts on “I said no( <1 min read)

  1. This one was based on a truly realistic , high moral and boldness of life.

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    1. Yes thank you so much 😊

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  2. I think she may not give him the best service!

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    1. 😊😊 maybe

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  3. michael1148humphris May 21, 2017 — 4:50 am

    He will be luck if she does not tip his food into his lap.

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    1. 😊😊 that’s right😀

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  4. Love it! She sure told him. 🙂

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    1. 😇😇 thank you so much

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  5. Well said, that girl! With luck he will take his custom elsewhere in future.

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  6. Dear Sree,

    Good for her for serving up a healthy portion of just desserts.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. 🙂 Thank you

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  7. Amazing and so bold. People act like idiots sometimes. They need a slap on their faces to come back to reality.

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    1. Yes that’s true🖐

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  8. Love it – so true too sometimes! I’d be fired my first day as a waitress if I had a jerk like that as a customer 😃

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    1. 😀😀 hahaha…thank you

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