Who wants to kill you?(1 min read)

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This week’s photo prompt is provided by Yarnspinner.

Shaking hands with detective Priyansh, Mr. Das introduced him to his wife and son.

Sitting down, Priyansh asked – “So why do you think your life’s in danger?”

“I’ve received threatening letters.”

“Can we talk privately?” asked Priyansh.

As they left the lawn, Priyansh added, “tell me if you suspect anybody.”

“I suspect both my wife and son.”

Priyansh frowned – “You’re a politician…your opponents…”

“In that case I would’ve gone to the police. I don’t want to make it public. Even if I die, you’ll investigate it and make sure they don’t get a single penny.” Mr. Das took a long sip of his tea.

Soon he started coughing violently and within seconds, fell onto the grass.

Priyansh checked his pulse and smirked – “It wasn’t difficult injecting the poison into your body when we shook hands…now I’ll prove the tea was poisoned..I’ve recorded our conversation which proves your suspicion on your family. Today I avenged my father’s death. You used your power to save your son who’d hit my father with his car.”

– Chirasree, a dreamer.


Word count – 174

Written for – FFfAW Challenge Week of May 9, 2017

47 thoughts on “Who wants to kill you?(1 min read)

  1. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious May 9, 2017 — 7:02 pm

    Revenge is never sweet 😈😈
    nice one, chirasree 🙂🙂

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    1. Thank you so much😊

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  2. kind of dark article, my favourite genre

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    1. Thank you for liking it😇

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      1. you don’t need to say thank you when someone likes your article. you’re a queen of dark article, exhibiting your evil side is what making you great and distinct blogger

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  3. Its really amazing how you managed to write such a interesting plot in such a small post. Awesome as always

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    1. Yeah it was different I have to agree😊 but as per the prompt rule I had to write it in 175 words

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  4. Great story! Loved the twist at the end. Revenge is sweet! I also want to remind you to link your story up to the InLinkz Story Board so the others can read it too.

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    1. Sure…my bad…forgot it…thanks a lot for reminding 😇

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  5. Amar thik otota bhalo laglona…kichu missing laglo…

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    1. 😊😊keep reading…hoeto porerta lege jbe

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      1. I never miss a single post of yours…so dkhai jak…asha kori kichu mone koroni…

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      2. Ekdomi na…honest feedback is always welcome and appreciated 😇

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  6. orangeorchards May 9, 2017 — 11:12 pm

    Wow. Such an unexpected turn the story took! Nice one Chirasree!

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    1. 😇😇 thank you so much

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      1. orangeorchards May 9, 2017 — 11:17 pm

        Welcome 🙂

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  7. Great story! Only one problem, it was to short.

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    1. Yeah I know…I had to write it within the word limit☹️…thank you for liking it😇

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  8. michael1148humphris May 10, 2017 — 1:14 am

    Now do I hope the local police are sharp, or the blood feud will continue when the daughter takes her revenge.

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    1. 🤔would have to write a 2nd part for that probably 😀

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  9. A convoluted tale of revenge. Nicely done.

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    1. Thank you so much 😇

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  10. A well crafted revenge.

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    1. 😇 thank you

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  11. A thriller in one minute read..wow

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    1. Thank you so much 😇

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  12. A very neat story of murder & revenge. Kudos.

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    1. Thank you 😇

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  13. I love a good revenge tale anytime! Well written this one.

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    1. Thank you so much 😇

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  14. It’s difficult to engage the reader in such a short post but you did it beautifully!!

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    1. Thank you so much 😇

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  15. A very well crafted crime story. Kudos, Sree

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    1. Thank you so much 😊😊

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    1. Thank you 😊

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  16. Wow. I had to do a double take, wait who killed who and why!? Great read =)

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  17. Very good story with a twist in the end – all within the word limit!

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  18. Thanks for visiting my blog ,,, too much of politics and current affairs

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    1. My pleasure 🙂

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