My memories of her

“The view is breathtaking!” my wife exclaimed.

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For me, it wasn’t beautiful; it was torturous. It brought back memories that made me hate myself a little more. It reminded me of the girl I once loved; I couldn’t help but curse myself. It brought me back to the moment I’d lost her, and made me loathe myself even more. Placing her head on my shoulder, she wished the love to last forever when we’d visited this place together; that memory left me with a lump in my throat.

“What’re you thinking about?” my wife asked.

“…about the girl I cheated on.”

– Chirasree, a dreamer.

32 thoughts on “My memories of her

    1. 🙂 you are shocked?

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      1. Yeah..hahah.. And there’s a cliff hanger ..but then i realized it’s the end..so what happened?? 😐

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      2. Haha..it’s part of a challenge to write a 100 word story…so this time you’ll have to be happy with this much :p and figure out the rest 🙂

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      3. Oh my! Now i need to write my thoughts.. Hahh they are scrambled at the moment.. Haaha thanks for this wonderful piece. ,

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      4. :)…thanks to you for leaving your feedback 😀

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      5. Hehehe .. Welcome dear

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  1. I want to know why he cheated…ya can’t just end it there 🙂

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    1. 🙂 somethings are better left unsaid 🙂

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      1. You just had me so intrigued 🙂

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      2. Do give it a read…https://thoughtsofwordsblog.wordpress.com/2017/04/18/my-memories-of-her-kamishibai-a-collaborative-project/ – this is a Haibun written in colaboration with this story 🙂

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  2. Ektu change korechi…ektu add korechi…asha kori bhalo lagbe….na lagle janio…abashyai…
    https://thoughtsofwordsblog.wordpress.com/2017/04/18/my-memories-of-her-kamishibai-a-collaborative-project/

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    1. It was required…loved it 🙂

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      1. NaPoWriMo por abar eksathe likhbo then…and next time it’ll be 100 words…50 tumi age likhbe then ami likhbo…

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      2. Okay…porchi 🙂

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  3. It is good how you maintained to tell the story completely and with the character describing his feeling and completing the challenge. Nice

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    1. 🙂🙂 thank you…your feedback matters a lot

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  4. And readers really love short story too so combo

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    1. Thank you.🙂

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  5. So short, so well done! I had yo reread to get the ending it was so shocking!

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  6. Oooh, nice. You packed a lot of story and emotion in there!

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    1. Thank you 😊

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  7. orangeorchards May 1, 2017 — 12:20 am

    I love these stories of unaccomplished love! 😉

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    1. 😄 thank you

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  8. Writings By Payal Tyagi May 23, 2017 — 10:39 am

    Wonderful story as usual Sree and would like to inform you that I have nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award,so congratulations dear.

    Here is the link for you :
    https://tyagipayal.wordpress.com/2017/05/22/make-some-noise-again/

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂 I’m checking it out

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      1. Writings By Payal Tyagi May 24, 2017 — 12:35 pm

        You deserve it ,so no need of thanks

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